Friday 12 June 2020

creative writing

link ones a upon time there was a little girl The little girl was wearing A little dress one day She was lost in the city one day she found a wolf in the tongue and the wolf dist go to the girl has a bon and one day the girl and the wolf was look at the stayi
and the stay was like a Wheel in the stay the girl and the wolf was look at the stay and the girl had a dream in bad and the wolf was sleeping gaon the grandmother with have toys on the grandmother.

3 comments:

  1. kia ora Aarav i am Joshua from Belfast school this is a great story with a great image did you think of making a part two. Next time you might want to put some more full-stop. what inspired you to do this.

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  2. Hi Aarav great imagination I like you post and its a great image for your story.

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  3. Hello Aarav,

    This is a great story you have here. Maybe next time you could read your story to yourself and see if it makes sense. And if you can try put some full stops in. Ether than that I think it was amazing! keep up the good work, blog ya later!

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